书面表达之请求帮助表达祝贺专训课件-2022届高三英语二轮复习.pptx

新高考二轮　作文请求帮助 表达祝贺专训[2020·全国卷Ⅲ改编]假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：1．剧情简介；2．指导内容；3．商定时间、地点。注意：1.词数80左右；2．结束语已为你写好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Im looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely，Li Hua满分作文第一步：“三定”审题　“三段”谋篇(一)“三定”审题1．定体裁：本文为求助信。2．定人称：本文以第一人称为主。3．定时态：主要使用一般现在时。(二)“三段”谋篇第一段(开篇点题)：点名写信目的；第二段(3个要点，缺一不可)：剧情简介；指导内容；商定时间和地点；第三段(巧妙收尾)：表达期待。满分作文第二步：斟酌词句　设计亮点1．我写信是想请您指导一部根据我们的一篇课文改编的短剧。__________________________________________________________________________(高频词汇＋定语从句＋被动语态)2．这篇课文讲述了一个名叫黛西的女孩的故事，她和一些野生动物交谈，并下定决心帮助保护环境。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________ (非谓语动词作定语＋定语从句) Im writing to ask for your guidance on a short play, which is adapted from one of our texts.The text tells a story about a girl named Daisy, who talks with some wild animals and makes up her mind to help protect the environment.3．如果您方便的话，我们可以在本周日早上8点在我们学校的艺术大厅见面吗？(1)Could we meet in our school art hall at 8：00 am this Sunday ______________________？(高频词汇)(2)Could we meet in our school art hall at 8：00 am this Sunday ______________________？(if条件状语从句)4．我们真诚地希望你能帮我们这个忙，帮助我们提高演技。We sincerely hope you can ___________________________________．(词汇不重，彰显水准)at your earliest convenienceif it is convenient for youdo us a favour and help improve our performance满分作文第三步：巧妙过渡　完美成篇Dear Miss Evans，Im writing to ask for your guidance on a short play, which is adapted from one of our texts.The text tells a story about a girl named Daisy, who makes up her mind to help protect the environment.I wonder if you can give us some expert guidance on dialogue between characters, plot, setting and so on. Could we meet in our school art hall at 8：00 am this Sunday if it is convenient for you? We sincerely hope you can do us a favour and hel