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林中莺续写;关注文本和两个首句中的重要信息： “Ally, I bet if we search really hard, we’ll see this little guy together some day.” Familiar smells of the earth rose up to greet her. Determined to start out the next morning, she was about to head home when a ringing birdsong floated down to her. 确定文本主题：父女之情，女儿用自己坚持不懈的搜寻达成与父亲生前的“约定”……;段落分布和写作重点;大自然明亮环境描写： The sweet aroma of flowers, the chirping insects as well as the familiar landscape brought back nostalgic reminiscences of the bygone days shared with father, almost calling forth hot tears in her reddened eyes. A sight of the limpid brooks quietened/exorcised torre