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读后续写套用模板与详解 收录于话题 \o 读后续写范文 #读后续写范文 \o 读后续写语料 #读后续写语料 \o 读后续写课件 #读后续写课件 一、套用模板 1. 情绪------情绪描写。从原材料中体会作者相应情绪，借助情绪的延续，以此为衔接，续写。 2. 细节-----进一步描述。 3. 转折----个人的努力或者借助外界的力量，使事情发生转折。 4. 转机-----事情似乎有了转机，让人抱有希望，心理能感到安慰。 5. 失望----问题仍然没有解决或者又出现了新的问题。 6. 想法----面对没有解决的问题或者新问题，突然有了想法或感触。 7. 结局-----在想法或感触的影响下，事情有了最后的转折/转机。 8. 点题-----呼应前文 ? 二、套用词汇 1. 情绪描写＆2.细节描写： 哭： ?howling(嚎哭)，?sob,?weep,?burst into tears,?burst out crying. (ones eyes)?brim with/be filled with tears 怕：?horror,?frightened,?scared,?speechless,?in(a)panic,?in a cold sweat,?be filled with terror,?rooted to the spot,?freeze,?ones knees feel weak, (hands)sweat 高兴、激动： （动词）dance,?jump/leap with joy, feel a surge of joy/?excitement,?whistle,?overcome with happiness/?delight /joy?/?excitement, (ones eyes)?twinkle,(ones heart) beat/?pound?wildly; (形容词）delighted,?overjoyed,?excited,?thrilled,?wild with joy 伤心、痛苦: ?feel a surge of sadness,?(sadness)?surge within sb. ,?ones heart ache,?overcome?with sadness 生气、愤怒：felt/?get angry/furious,?feel a surge of anger/rage/fury,?eyes blaze,?storm out?of/into/off,?storm/say angrily, sth. makes sb. s blood boil, sth. makes sb. extremely angry,?clasp?ones fists/teeth, sb. s?blood is up 3. 转折：个人努力或借助外界 鼓起勇气：pluck up/take/gather/summon up ones courage 毫不犹豫：without even thinking,?without delay,?without hesitation,?without a second thought 4. 转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰 似乎：as if,?seemingly,?appear,?seem 欣慰：breath a sigh of relief,?sigh with relief,?to ones relief 5. 失望：但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题: 徒劳?:?in vain, no use,?without success 茫然?:?at a loss, at sea, blankly, be lost in a fog 6. 想法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法） occur to, hit, strike, flash into ones mind, crowd in ones mind, dawn on 7. 结局：过段时间，事情有了最后的转折: 过了一段时间 not long, shortly afterwards, before long,?for an instant/moment 令人惊讶的是? to ones surprise,?strangely enough 8.总结：点题，呼应前文 realize, echo, linger, whisper in ones mind, down deep in ones heart ? 三、套用句子 哭： 1. A lump came to his throat. 2. Her eyes were red from crying. 3. Her eyes brimmed with tea