Unit11单元话题写作指导课件2021-2022学年人教版英语九年级全册.pptx

Unit 11 Writing --worries;本单元以情感为话题，谈论身边的人或事给自己带来的情绪变化。写此类文章时，可以通过描述一件具体的事情来表达自己的喜、怒、哀、乐，也可以描写生活或学习中的烦恼或焦虑。; 写作此类话题作文的常用表达有： The loud music makes me nervous.喧闹的音乐使我紧张。 Money and fame dont always make people happy.金钱和名声不能总使人们开心。 I would rather...我宁愿……. Im not happy because.…我不开心，因为…… I used to have such worries as well, so I can understand how you are feeling now.我过去也有这样的烦恼，所以我能理解你现在的感受。;;题目：假如你是李华，今天收到了也正在准备中考的表弟Peter发给你的电子邮件，得知他目前在学习和生活中出现的烦恼。请根据以下信息给他回一封邮件，并针对他的问题提出两点具体建议。 要点：1.表达对Peter烦恼的理解。 2.Peter的烦恼∶（1）家长施加的压力太大（2） 感到疲惫（3）成绩提高得不明显 3.针对Peter的烦恼，结合你的经验提出两点具有提建议。;第一步：仔细审题 1、格式-- 2、时态-- 3、人称-- 4、体裁--;第二步：谋篇布局 第一段— Dear Peter, Glad to hear from you! Im very sorry to hear that you have some worries in study and daily life.;第二步：谋篇布局 第二段— From your email, I know that your parents put too much pressure on you. Whats more, you often feel tired. You study very hard, but you cant improve your test scores every time.I used to have such worries as well, so I can understand how you are feeling now.;第二步：谋篇布局 第三段— I think there is no need to worry about them.Everything will be OK. Heres some advice for you. First, you can have a good talk with your parents, tell them your thoughts and efforts,and let them understand you as much as possible.Second, its best for you to finish your homework as quickly as possible.Make sure that you go to bed before ten at night. Remember that you shouldnt drink coffee or do anything exciting before going to bed. With a good sleep at night, you wont feel tired the next day.;第二步：谋篇布局 第四段— Hope my advice can help you.Best wishes! Yours, Li hua;Sample Writing Dear Peter, Glad to hear from you! Im very sorry to hear that you have some worries in study and daily life. From your email, I know that your parents put too much pressure on you. Whats more, you often feel tired. You study very hard, but you cant improve your test scores every time.I used to have such wor