大学四级英语写作解析.ppt

四级作文评分原则;四级考试大纲写作要求;四级作文评分原则;四级作文评分原则;四级作文评分标准;四级作文评分标准;四级作文题目;四级作文评分标准及样卷;四级作文评分标准及样卷;四级作文2分样卷;Wait a time, The ploiemen arriverd in the Accident place. My opiontoin: The car driver is so fast by car, and He didn’t attendation to the children by bike aside the road. Two children by bike didn’t heared the car come. All of above, I think the car driver must be serier the Traffic Accident. ;四级作文5分样卷;四级作文5分样卷;四级作文8分样卷;四级作文8分样卷;四级作文11分样卷;四级作文11分样卷;四级作文14分样卷;四级作文14分样卷;你在用Chinglish写作吗？ ;英语写作常见错误与分析 ;二． 修饰语错位（Misplaced Modifiers）英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化． 例１． I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.;三． 句子不完整（Sentence Fragments）在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解．可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生．例１． There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on . 剖析：本句后半部分＂for example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句．改为：There are many ways to know society ,for example ,by TV ,radio ,and newspaper. ;四． 悬垂修饰语（Dangling Modifiers） 所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清．例如：At the age of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中＂at the age of ten“ 改为：When I was ten, my grandfather died. 例１． To do well in college, good grades are essential. 剖析：句中不定式短语 “to do well in college” 的逻辑主语不清楚．改为：To do well in college, a student needs good grades. ;五． 词性误用(Misuse of Parts of Speech)“词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名词当动词用等．例１． None can negative the importance of money. 剖析???negative 系形容词，误作动词。改为：None can deny the importance of money. ;六． 指代不清(Ambiguous Reference of Pronouns)指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不一致。试看下面这一句：Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid. (玛丽和我姐姐很要好，因为她要她做她的伴娘。);坚持八条英文写作守则;2.Write clearly. Be concise. Avoid wordiness. 写作清晰，务必精简，避免赘言。 ;3.Use good grammar and write complete sentences. 使用好的文法，写出完整句子。 ;4.Write simple sentences. Avoid a fancy style. 尝试简单句，避免花俏的句法。 ;5.Avoid slang、cliche and informal words. 避免俚语、陈腔滥调