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读后续写速成:“五点爆破”法
五步写作法流程示例
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the
forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they
reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and
walked away.
With nopath to follow,Janejust walked on for quite a long time.After she had climbed to a high place, she
turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped
mountain top.She suddenlyrealizedthat shewaslost.
“Tom!” shecried.“Help!”
No reply.If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.Jane kept moving,but the farther
she walked, the more confused she became.As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop
for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold
him andtellhimhowmuch shelovedhim.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a
distance.Quickly she followed the soundto a stream.Toher greatjoy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank
and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk
alongthe stream andhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.
As shepickedher way carefully alongthe stream,Janeheard ahelicopter.Isthat for me?Unfortunately,the
trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead.
Janetook offheryellowblouse,thinkingthat she shouldgoto an open areaandflagthem ifthey cameback again.
Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark._________________________________
Itwasdaybreakwhen Janewokeup._________________________________________
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