2022年广东佛山高三英语读后续写试评样卷.pdfVIP

2021~2022 学年佛山市普通高中教学质量检测 （二） 读后续写题试评样卷 参考范文 Parag raph 1: Hearing the teacher’s words, Mai Lin smiled. Sheknew whatwascoming.They’ddone lotsofphysical fitnesstraining ather old schooland shewasquitegood atropeclimbing.“Who’s first?”theteacher asked.“Alison?”ToMaiLin’ssurprise,Alison turned aspaleasthemoon and shookherhead.“She’sscared,”MaiLin thought.“Perfect Alisonwasscared.” SuddenlyMaiLin heardher ownvoice saying,“I’lldoit.”Alison lookedup at MaiLin in great surprise,andallthe other classmatesseemed surprised,too.Theteachernodded andtoldMaiLin toclimb. Parag raph 2: Mai Lin stepped forward and g ot close to the rope. Sheappeared calmbutwas extremely excited.Sheclimbedtheropevery fast andreachedtheceilingwithin what seemed a few seconds,effortlessly.Asshereachedthetop,sheglanceddown ather fellow studentsbelow. Now itwasAlisonwho appearedlikea small ant.She sawAlison lookingup,eyeswidewith admiration.MaiLin clungtothetop oftheropefor amoment longer andthenheadeddown to join theclass.Once shegot ontheground,everybody cheered.MaiLin knew shewouldbe different fromthat day on. 评分原则： 1. 本题总分为 25 分，按七个档次进行评分。 2. 评分时，应主要从内容、语言表达和篇章结构三个方面考虑，给分比重应着 重在内容上，其次是语言表达和篇章，具体为: (1) 续写内容的质量、完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度; (2) 所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性; (3) 上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。 3. 评分时，应先根据作答的整体情况确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求 来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 4.评分时还应注意: (1) 词数少于 120 的，酌情扣分; (2) 书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分; (3) 单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程 度予以考虑，英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 ５、各档次样卷 (22—25 ) 第七档 分 23-24 23 22-23 22-23 (18—21 ) 第六档 分 19-20