高中英语作文写作教学公开课 观点议论.pptxVIP

会计学;基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析;考场作文TIPS;写作基本步骤; 现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。;The outline of the writing; 高三学生 ______________ 春游 ______________ 讨论 _______________ 高考临近 __________________________________________ 接触自然_________________ 精神放松 _______________ 呼吸新鲜空气 ________________ 大脑休息 __________________ 没心情玩____________________ 耽误学习___________________ _________________;主题句的内容要明确，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性;巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系;The body part;Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康; 表列举说明的关联词: Firstly/ First of all/ To begin with, .... Secondly… Thirdly… In the first place… In the second place… In the third place… Finally/ Last but not least/, .... ;Reason 2:活动是精神放松/大脑休息/有利于学习 ;Conclusion: 小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应。; However, …of them hold a different view. / …of them hold the opposite opinion. People who are against it don’t think so. Different from those…., …people think …. On the other hand, … some people are against the idea. ; 表列举说明的关联词: Firstly/ First of all/ To begin with, .... Secondly… Thirdly… In the first place… In the second place… In the third place… Finally/ Last but not least/, .... ;Reason 1:高考临近，没有心情玩 翻译: They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere. They say/believe/hold the opinion… that…. ;Reason 2:春游耽误学习 翻译:Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies. 表示递进、强调的关联词 .... Besides/Apart from/ What’s more/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/worse still/ to make matters worse… ;;Homework: Finish and improve your composition and hand it in tomorrow.