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studying abroad大作文学生习作原文 -感谢暑假班的某位同学First Draft First Proof Read 第一段： Nowday, as much people know how important study abroad by increased availability, expecially in language. In China, every school open the English course, start at infant school. As part of student choice go abroad study, they can broaden their horizons, knowledge of culture and learn survival skills. 请找出其中的错误，并提出修改建议。 第一段词句修改及翻译：Nowday, as much people know how important study abroad by increased availability, expecially in language.当今由于出国留学越来越普及，很多人意识到出国留学的重要性，特别是外语学习。Nowadays, many people know the importance of overseas study due to its increasing availability, especially language education. In China, every school open the English course,start at infant school.在中国从幼儿园开始每个学校都开设英语课。In China, every school has English course, starting from infant school As part of student choice go abroad study, they can broaden their horizons, knowledge of culture and learn survival skills.另外，出国留学还可以拓宽学生的眼界，学习文化知识和生存 English course, 能力 o As part of students choice of going abroad, they can also studying abroad大作文学生习作高分修改 --第三次修改third draft 第一段： Nowadays, many people know the importance of overseas study due to its increased availability, especially language education. In China, every school has English course. Since much more international educational programs have been available to Chinese students in the lasttwo decades, one of the most talked-about topics at the moment is the importance of an overseas Idegree. English language proficiency, as a pre-requisite, is often under the spotlight, given that almost every school in China offers English courses at different levels, starting from the infant school. As part of students Choice going abroad, they can also broaden their horizons, learn knowledge of culture and survival skills. Therefore, I agree with the view that students should be encouraged to further their studies in foreign countries. Apart from achieving operational command of the language, these students