2015年6月四级考试答案解析（二）.docxVIP

2015年6月大英语四级考试真题(二)答案与详解 Part Ⅰ Writing 审题思路 这是一篇四级考试中常见的议论文。此次通过漫画所呈现出的话题computer(电脑）是考生日常生活中耳熟能详的话题，因此写起并不难。行文中,考生应将重点放在第二段阐述电脑与日常生活的关系上联系实际分析可知，二者关系为：电脑为日常生活提供了便利，但不能完全占据人们的日常生活。 写作提纲 一、提出观点：电脑在日常生活中虽然重要但并非必不可少(an important but not indispensable role) 一、论证观点：1、过度沉迷于电脑对我们的健康不利（exert a negative impact on our health) 2、过度使用电脑会将我们隔离在社交圈之外（isolate us from the social circles) 三、总结观点：l、电脑确实改善了我们的生活（really promote our life) 2、不应该在电脑上花费过多的时间而舍弃享受美好的生活（should not spend too much time on it at the expense of savoring our good life) 范文点评 高分范文 精彩点评 This Modern Life ① In the picture is a person using his computer all day, whether he is at work, at home, playing or in his sleep.② This drawing vividly depicts a common phenomenon that computers nowadays deeply penetrate into our daily life and we can not do without it even for a minute.③ However, from my perspective, computers play an important but not indispensable role in our modem life. ④ It is true that computers make our life convenient and provide instant assistance. But it is not a necessity.⑤ To start with, excessive addiction to computers may exert a negative impact on our health. Instead of taking exercise in our spare time, we may be intrigued by the various contents on it. ⑥ Furthermore, indulging in computers may isolate us from the social circles. Since we can chat with the virtual friends via computers, we may not bother to communicate with families or Mends around us. ⑦ In conclusion, as the product of the high technology, computer really promotes our life.⑧ Nevertheless, we should not spend too much time on it at the expense of savoring our good life. 对漫画进行描述一天当中人们无时无刻不在使用电脑。 揭示漫画隐含的信息：电脑现在深深地渗透到我们的日常生活中。 使用from my perspective提出观点：电脑在日常生 活中虽然重要但并非必不可少。 承上启下，论证观点。 ⑤⑥使用to start with和furthermore,从两个方面展开论证，层次分明。 ⑦⑧使用in conclusion和nevertheless总结观点并提出建议。 加分亮点 penetrate into 渗入，渗透 ； from one’s perspective 在某人看； indispensable必不可少的； instant assistance 及时帮助 ； necessity必需品； be intrigued by.对…着迷； s