2022上海十六区高三英语二模汇编 —作文（答案解析版）.docxVIP

第PAGE1页/共NUMPAGES1页 2022上海高三英语二模作文汇编 1.宝山区 VI. Guided Writing 76. Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 现在，除了在实体店购物以外，线上购物的方式也是多种多样，有社区团购，有抖音带货，还有自己直接在线上商家购物等等。你最喜欢哪一种线上购物方式，请介绍一下。 文章必须包括： 1. 简单介绍一种你熟悉的线上购物； 2. 对你所购买物品及售后服务做反馈评价。 （注：文中不要出现真实姓名和学校） 【答案】With the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult job. There are various ways to shop online, including group purchasing, Douyin delivery, and so on, among which group purchasing is my favorite. Group purchasing is very convenient and what is special is that it provides products with low prices, therefore, it saves people a lot of money. Besides, because there are many familiar people participating in group purchasing, it can reduce the risk of buying fake products. Recently, I bought a laptop through group purchasing. The store shipped quickly and after I received it, the customer service staff carefully explained to me the performance of the computer and how to maintain and update the system to get the best experience. All in all, it is a very pleasant shopping experience. 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。现在，除了在实体店购物以外，线上购物的方式也是多种多样，有社区团购，有抖音带货，还有自己直接在线上商家购物等等。请介绍一下你最喜欢的一种线上购物方式，并对你所购买物品及售后服务做反馈评价。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：various→a variety of/varieties of 参加：participate in→take part in/be involved in 减少： reduce→minimize/lower 令人愉快的：pleasant→enjoyable/entertaining 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Besides, because there are many familiar people participating in group purchasing, it can reduce the risk of buying fake products. 拓展句：Besides, many familiar people participate in group purchasing, reducing the risk of buying fake products. 【点睛】[高分句型1] There are various ways to shop online, including group purchasing, Douyin delivery, and so on, among which group purchasing is my favorite.（运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句） [高分句型2] Group purchasing is very convenient and what is special is that it provides products with low prices, therefore, it saves people a lot of money. （运用了what引导的主语