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四 级 写 作;基本要求;评分原则 ;３．从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。 　　内容和语言是统一的。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容则通过语言来表现。 　　故在判分时，必须考虑文章是否切题；是否充分表达了思想，是否用简洁而贴切的 　　英语表达。是否有语言上的错误而造成理解上的障碍。;４．避免趋中现象。 　　评卷人员在所阅的全部作文中，不应只给中间的几种分数。该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分的给低分，包括零分。;评分标准 ;２分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且严重。 ５分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，缺乏连贯性。有较多的严重语言错误。 ８分基本切题。表达思想较为清楚，文字尚连贯；但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。 １１分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 １４分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本无语言错误。;字数与段数的标准 ;CET-4作文实例剖析 ; Firstly, I’ve a pleasant personality. Last year, I was the dorm director of our building and I managed to get along with all the students well. I have acquired working experience and communication skills which I consider as the most essential for the coordinator of the whole student union. Secondly, I’m always ready to create. At present our union is very well organized. However, our activity schedule is slightly monotone. I’m willing to add some vivid elements into it in order to make our campus life more enjoyable. If I am elected the chairman, I promise I will become your voice and build the Student Union into a bridge between the students and university. I’m your best choice, vote for yourself, thank you. ;剖析;11 Points; If I were chosen to be the chairman, I’ll work for the need of the students. I will tell the school what we students really need and what we don’t want. I believe, I am the best choice for the post of the chairman of the student union. Thank you.;剖析 ;8 Points;剖 析 ;5 Points;剖 析 ;小 结 ;写作的步骤 ; 可以将３０分钟分为四部分： 第１－２分钟　　　　　审题 第３－５分钟　　　　　拟提纲（题目式提纲） 第６－２７分钟　　　　正文写作 第２８－３０分钟　　???检查修改;审 题;My View on Bicycles in China;My View on Bicycles in China;Ⅰ.Introduction: TS: China is called the kingdom of bicycles because… DS: ①… ②… ③… (popularity of bicycles in China) Ⅱ.Body TS: Compared with cars, bicycles have many advantages. DS: First,… Second,… Third,… Besides,… (advantages) Ⅲ.Conclusion However,… DS: ①… ②… ③… (disadvantages and our comment);My View on Bicycles in China;The Two-Day Weekend;审题时，我们必须注意题目的大小。若题