英语写作 第三周.pptxVIP

会计学1 English Writing: Week Two句子写作技巧第1页/共27页 句子写作1. 句子类型 (for revision)3. 语法病句4. 写作病句第2页/共27页 1. 句子类型According to use, sentences are declarative陈述句, interrogative问句, imperative 祈使句or exclamatory感叹句According to structure, sentences are simple简单, compound并列, complex复合, or compound-complex并列复合From a rhetorical point of view, sentences are loose松散句, periodic掉尾句, or balanced排比句第3页/共27页 simple sentencescomplex sentences compound-complex sentencesstructureTypes of sentencescompound sentences第4页/共27页 loose sentences periodic sentences balanced sentences rhetoricalTypes of sentences第5页/共27页 Identify the types of sentences Open any English textbook available to you and check up the sentence types contained at any page. Which is more and which is less?Which sentences do you frequently put in use?What should we do?第6页/共27页 Sentence writing 21. 语法病句2. 写作病句3. 句内强调：从属连接方法第7页/共27页 1. A. Grammatical errors from textbooksDangling modifiers 悬垂修饰语 A modifier that opens a sentence must be followed immediately by the word it is meant to describe. Otherwise, the modifier is said to be dangling.E.g. While reading the newspaper, my dog sat with me on the front steps.Dancing on their hind leg, the audience cheered wildly as the elephants paraded by.第8页/共27页 Misplaced modifiers 修饰语错位Misplaced modifiers are words that, because of awkward placement, do not describe what the writer intended them to describe. E.g. He nearly brushed his teeth for twenty minutes every night.The woman picked up a heavy frying pan with arthritis.关节炎 第9页/共27页 Run-ons 粘连句A run-on is two complete thoughts that are run together with no adequate sign given to mark the break between them.Run-ons can be divided into two types: fused sentences混合句 and comma splices逗号误接句 .E.g. The bus stopped suddenly I spilled coffee all over my shirt.Mario told everyone in the room to be quiet, his favorite show was on.第10页/共27页 Fragments 不完整句Every sentence must have a subject and a verb