高考卷作文英语范文 第一篇.docxVIP

　　Among all the instructive proverbs that give people advice, the one I like most is “Where there is a will, there is a way”. This short, beautiful sentence tells us an incontrovertible truth: if you have a dream and stick to it, you will realize it sooner or later. 　　For me, the saying has a special meaning. When I was in Junior Middle School, I was so poor in my studies that I nearly gave up. But my head-teacher was always there and gave me confidence every time I lose heart. He used to say, “a little more effort and you will make it.” 　　Thanks to my dearest teacher, all my efforts paid off and finally I became a top student. “Nothing is impossible to a willing heart”, as long as you have a dream, keep trying and you?ll make it, too. 　　评分细则 　　优秀(22--25)：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容充实;语法结构多样，词汇丰富，行文流畅，显示出较强的语言运用能力，允许有个别语言错误，但不影响意思表达。 　　良好(18--21)：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，行文较流畅，语言有少量错误，但基本不影响意思表达。 　　一般(15--17)：紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确;基本达到预期写作目的。 　　较差(11--14)：要点不全，内容不完整，行文不够连贯;语言错误较多，半数句子基本正确。 　　差(6--10)：内容混乱，或主要内容偏离主题，尚能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句。 　　极差(0--5)：只能写出与内容相关的词语，没有有效信息;抄写其他文章，或只是写出与作文无关的内容。 　　英语作文：三点关键定档因素(不跑题是前提) 　　词汇多样性 　　语法复杂性 　　文章连贯性 　　书信作文模板 　　Dear X X X， 亲爱的X X X 　　I am extremely pleased to hear from you.(我很高兴收到你的来 　　信) And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____. (我很高兴写封信告诉 　　你。。。) I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience. (我希望你可以在空闲的时候尽快给我回信) 　　Best regards for your health and success. 祝你身体健康万事如意 　　Sincerely yours，你最真诚的X X X 　　X X X 　　高考英语作文推荐 　　In recent yearsRecently,more and more students have studied hard to go to universityies.（Its actually better for you to use the present continuous tense here coz ur trying to explain a well known concept）. However,universities always have some limitations tofor students,like the number of students.So in that case some students often loselost their chances to accept their educationgetting college phenomenon is qui