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Read this letter and imagine you are the adviser who deals with students’ problems. Write a letter to give Xiao lei some helpful advice.Writing第1页/共9页第一页，共10页。 Dear…, Can you help me please? My best friend has just started smoking. I do not like it and I told her what I thought. She laughed at me and said that I was not grown-up enough. Then she offered me a cigarette and I felt so embarrassed and awkward. I did not know how to refuse it. Please help me. I do not want to start smoking, but I do not want to lose my best friend, either. Your sincerely,Li Xiaolei第2页/共9页第二页，共10页。 Structureshow your sympathy for her and encourage her list the harmful effects of smoking for smokersexpress your wish 第3页/共9页第三页，共10页。 How to advise people about what to doHow to advise people about what not to doIllustration(陈述) Addition (递增)Contrast (转折)Summary(总结)ExpressionDo…Dont forget to… You should… It would be a good idea to… Besides, Moreover, In addition I think, In my opinion, I believe You don’t have to…It’s OK/ all right to… But, on the other hand, otherwise Don’t…There is no need to…It’s not necessary to…In short, In brief, In all 第4页/共9页第四页，共10页。 Dear Li Xiaolei, I am sorry you have found yourself in such a difficult situation. First, there is no need for you to feel embarrassed and awkward. She may think that she is behaving in a grownup way but you are the one with sense on your side. Here is some advice that I think you might give her:Sample Letter第5页/共9页第五页，共10页。 1. Smoking cigarettes is addictive and expensive.2. It can make you ill later in life. Even breathing in other people’s smoke can make you ill.3. It is a dirty habit.4. It is more difficult to stop than it is to start. Second, talk to your friend gently and explain that you are still good friends and don’t want to break this friendship. 第6页/共9页第六页，共10页。 However, you’ll not begin smoking to suit her. Give her the information above and then explain that whatever she chooses to do you will r