英语作文公开课.pptxVIP

书面表达（满分25分）;;; ;三 出彩句;;四 连句成篇 Dear Father, You have worked outside our hometown for a good many years. I hope you can enjoy working there. You are always quite busy working, so that you can’t come back home often. I miss you very much and hope you can come back home to see us in your spare time . Now everything is going on well with me in my school. I am getting on well with my classmates and teachers. And I am doing well in my studies. So you can feel relieved. Father, I know you work very hard. I am determined to work hard like you and wish to be admitted to an excellent university. Then after graduation , I can find an ideal job. In the future, I can repay you and Mother for what you have done for me. your son, Li Hua. ;五 高考满分作文欣赏;[学生满分作文];[名师点评] 1．结构清晰，层次分明。覆盖了所有内容要点。 2．语句通顺，过渡自然。Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, Last but not least等过渡词的使用，使文章过渡自然，浑然一体。 3．decide on, in great demand等高级词汇的使用以及It is difficult for me to make ...等高级句式的运用，充分证明了作者对语言的驾驭能力。 4．总之，本文达到了外在美、结构美、词汇美、句式美、衔接美的要求，为满分作文。 ;一 写作步骤：三大步 1. 认真审题：审要求，审内容，审时态等 2. 选词造句：列出关键词组和句型 3. 连句成文：用正确的语法结构写出准确的句子 并形成篇章 注意检查哦：看拼写、单复数、主谓一致等 ;二 写作段落：三大段; 三 写作原则：三注意 语言第一（语法结构从句、强调句、感叹句、倒装、被动、分词、复合结构、名言谚语等和词汇地道，味道…高级） 内容第二（内容要点全面） 结构第三（连接成分有效）;实 战 练 习 作文题目 ;实战练习; ;限时练笔提炼思路 平时演练实战见效;检查;Homework: 利用“三三制”，完成这篇作文。;Thank you!;;感谢您的观看！;内容总结