母亲节的惊喜读后续写课件-2023届高三英语二轮复习写作专项.pptVIP

Teaching CONTENTS 续写技巧 01 文本解读 02 解题指导 03 实战演练 04 续写技巧 第一部分 三个原则 原文一致原则 内容要前后衔接, 上下连贯 ，语言表达风格一致 曲折性原则 正能量原则 (problems→solutions) 过程跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终都会解决 故事内容充满正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观 四个步骤 1. 读懂大意，理清脉络 找寻基本要素：5W(who /when / where/ what/why) 利用曲线图获取细节信息（人物性格，情节情感，文章主题，语言风格） 2. 细读首句，构思框架 结合所给两段首句定出续写框架 结合正能量和原文呼应 3. 增加细节，提笔写作 依据情节发展和常识，在确定框架内可按“所见，所想，所说，所为，所感”构思大致框架 4. 修改润色，妙笔生花 场景描写，动作描写，心理描写，有效对话 文本解读 第二部分 A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Th