2017英语写作11class利用尾句首和中位置调整强调程度.pdfVIP

重构 (Rearrangement) •利用句尾、句首和句中位置，调整强调程度。 •利用常规位置、顺序和序列增强连贯性，破之以强调。 ……倒装句，制造序列以破之！ •强调句型： 1. What John did is breaking the window. 2. It is John who broke the window. 3. The window is broken by John. 4. There is window that was broken. TO L THE TRUTH… 1. The middle-aged American couple was enjoying a vacation. 2. The vacation was in an ancient Mayan city. (玛雅人的) 3. They were tired of the sightseeing group. 4. They broke away to do some exploring. 5. They explored on their own. The middle-aged American couple, enjoying a vacation in an ancient Mayan city, tired of the sightseeing group, broke away to do some exploring on their own. Enjoying a vacation in an ancient Mayan city, tired of the sightseeing group, the middle-aged American couple broke away to do some exploring on their own. 6. They climbed a pyramid. (金字塔) 7. Its step stones were overgrown with weeds. 8. They wanted to reach one of the ledges. [岩架(岩石突出处)] They climbed a pyramid, its step stones overgrown with weeds, wanting to reach one of the ledges. Wanting to reach one of the ledges, they climbed a pyramid, its step stones overgrown with weeds. 9. The woman streamed suddenly. 10. And her husband fell over. 11. She was gras his chest. The woman streamed suddenly, and her husband fell over, his chest grasped by her. Suddenly, the woman streamed, gras her husbands chest, and he fell over. 12. The two tumbled down to the horrified group below. (绊倒) 13. Their arms and legs were flailing. (胡乱摆动) The two tumbled down to the horrified group below, their arms and legs flailing. The two tumbled down to the horrified group below, their arms and legs flailing. 14. What happened to the couple? 15. It is ing more common. 16. At the same time the ruins develop into tourist attractions. (景 点) What happened to the couple is in