读后续写+kiss原则写亲情类+讲义 高三英语二轮复习.docxVIP

读后续写 “亲情篇”---实践KISS写作原则 KISS=Keep It Simple and Stupid。不要一味追求高级表达，构思好故事情节，用课标内的词汇表达清楚、表达正确！长短句相结合，以含to do, doing,?done非谓语动词的简单句为主，加上2-4个从句，你的续写就是高档作文了。 快来实践吧！ 1.?祖孙情深? 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (标记说明：黄色为非谓语动词14个，红色为三连动， 蓝色为从句16句，斜体为并列句） Ian was a young boy?who loved?spending?time with his grandpa. They would?go?on adventures together,?explore?the woods behind their house, and?play?games. But?as Ian’s grandpa grew older, he started?to forget?things. At first, it was just little things, like?where he left his keys?or?what he had for breakfast.?But soon, it became clear?that something more serious was happening. His grandpa had Alzheimer’s disease. Ian didn’t fully understand?what that meant, but he could see?that his grandpa was changing.?He would get?confused?and?disoriented, and sometimes he didn’t recognize Ian or his parents. It was hard for Ian?to watch?his grandpa?struggle, but he still loved?spending?time with him. One day, Ian’s grandpa didn’t come over for their usual adventure. Ian was worried and asked his parents?where he was. They told him?that his grandpa was in the hospital,?and that he might not be able?to come?home. Ian began?to experience?a nerve breakdown. He didn’t know?what he would do without his grandpa. But then he had an idea. He decided?to make?a book about their adventures together,?filled?with pictures and stories of all the fun?they had had. He worked on it every day,?drawing?and?writing?and remembering. When Ian’s grandpa came home from the hospital, he was confused and disoriented. But then Ian showed him the book?he had made. They looked through it together,?and Ian told his grandpa all about the adventures?they had had.?Slowly but surely, his grandpa began?to remember. Over the next few weeks and months, Ian and his grandpa looked at the book together every day. They?laughed and talked and remembered.?Ian’s grandpa may have forgotten a lot of things,?but he never forgot the love?he had for his grandson. 注意： 1.续写词数应为80到100词