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高考英语作文范例及评分标准 普通高考评卷英语作文评分标准评分总则：1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否达到及格线（15分），然后确定其所属的具体档次，以该档次的要求来衡量，最后给分。其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。4、评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5、若缺少要点，分数降一档处理。6、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。7、书写较差以至于影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。评分细则：优秀（22--25）：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容充实；语法结构多样，词汇丰富，行文流畅，显示出较强的语言运用能力，允许有个别语言错误，但不影响意思表达。良好（18--21）：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，行文较流畅，语言有少量错误，但基本不影响意思表达。一般（15--17）：紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确；基本达到预期写作目的。较差（11--14）：要点不全，内容不完整，行文不够连贯；语言错误较多，半数句子基本正确。差（6--10）：内容混乱，或主要内容偏离主题，尚能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句。极差（0--5）：只能写出与内容相关的词语，没有有效信息；抄写其他文章，或只是写出与作文无关的内容。高考命题组提供的参考范文：　Dear Peter, 　　I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper. 　　The?“Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative.400 words wouldbe fine. Could we have your article before June 28? 　　I’m looking forward to hearing from you. 　（95words）　Yours,Li Hua【点评】该参考范文语言简练，表达准确，但从高考考场作文考虑应提示学生词数再增加一 4. 阅卷组确定的15分作文范例Dear Peter, 　　I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper. 　The English newspaper have a “foreign culture” program. If your article is written well, it will be select in newspaper. The article is about American festivals and customs, besides inclouded media school students’ life. There is no doubt that you can make it. Because you is familiar with them. In opinion, you can also increase students how to study. Most importantly, your article can help us broaden horizon and let us know more American culture.You nee