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天行健，君子以自强不息。地势坤，君子以厚德载物。——《易经》 智课网GRE备考资料 大丈夫处世，不能立功建业，几与草木同腐乎？——《罗贯中》 常将有日思无日，莫待无时思有时。——《增广贤文》 GRE 官方写作题库64 The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds. 范文 The argument above consists of three claims: (1) machines are tools of human minds; (2) human minds will always be superior to machines; and (3) it is because machines are human tools that human minds will always be superior to machines. While I concede the first claim, whether I agree with the other two claims depends on how one would consider the word superior. 内容 详细条目 段落 此段结构 细看之下本段只有两句话。第一个长句分析了题目，第二句提出了 作者观点。作者将题目内容解析为三层：机器是人类思想的工具； 人脑优越于机器；正因为机器是人脑的工具所以人脑优于机器。作 者同意第一条，但对第二三条的意见要基于“优越”的意义。 此段功能 分析题目，提出作者观点。 The statement is clearly accurate insofar as machines are tools produced by human minds. After all, would any machine even exist unless a human being invented it? Even machines designed to entertain or amuse us—for example, toy robots, cars and video games, and novelty items —are in fact tools. Their inventors use them for a variety of purposes including engaging in commerce and the business of entertainment and amusement. And, the claim that a machine can be an end in itself, without purpose or utilitarian function for humans whatsoever, is dubious at best, since I cannot conjure up even a single example of any such machine. Whenever are machine is created, there is usually some purpose designated for it. 内容 详细条目 段落 此段结构 总分结构。第一句提出本段中心，同意机器是人脑的工具的观点。 接下来的三句话解释了无论哪种机器都是因人类有特定需要而发明 的；再接下来的一句说道无法举出没有目的而设计的机器。最后一 句重申了机器是配合人需要的目的而产生的。 此段功能 提出论点一，解释机器是人类思想的工具的原因。 As for the statements second claim, it is not clear whether