2022年新高考作文二续写故事课件-2024届高考英语作文复习专项.pptx

读后续写高考试卷中读后续写题总分为?25?分,按?5?个档次给分。第五档(21-25分)?与所给短文融洽度高,与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理;?内容丰富,应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语;所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确,可能有些许错误,但完全不影响意义表达;?有效地使用了语句间的连接成分.第四档(16-20分)?与所给短文融洽度较高,与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理;?内容比较丰富,应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语;所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确,可能有些许错误,但完全不影响意义表达;?比较有效地使用语句间的连接成分.找到矛盾冲突点~矛盾是故事的起点~人与自然 外界 灵感一闪 借助外力人与社会 误解 沟通让步人与自我 自己 自我意识觉醒 - 改过自新 情节构思负转正的行文思路段首句的前后影响找到可呼应的细节 2021 新高考~ 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISEThe twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan