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英语说明文及范文点评 【要求】 要求：假设你是一名图书馆的工作人员，请写一篇文章说明文，介绍图书的借阅规则。字数在 80100 字之间。 【范文】 Something You Must Know This library is and English Language teaching and learning librany. If you want to borrow some books, you must fill out a library application form and put it in the box on the librarians desk. Because of the large number of applications we receive each week, you must wait one week. Please bring yor student or work card to pick up your library card. Library application forms which are not picked up within 2 months will be discarded and you will have to reapply. 【评语】 本文的借书规则表述得比较清晰，注意到了说明文语言的精练准确、通俗易懂的特点。对于高中生而言，这是一篇优秀的应试作文。 There is no indefinite liberty. 【要求】 要求：小程原来英语成绩很差，自从他参加了学校的英语角，成绩有了很大的进步， 尤其是听力和口语提高更是迅速。请你代小程写一篇短文，介绍一下英语角的情况。 【范文】 English Corner English Corner is very useful to learn to communicate in English. Learning a foreign language requires four skills: reading, writing, listening and speaking. The English Corner is a wonderful place to practise both listening and speaking. English Corner is also a good place to meet new friends. When I went to English Corner last Sunday, I came across a variety of people, who all had one thing in common; that is they wanted to communicate in English. So the atmosphere was relaxing. English Corner enlarges our would. As we listen to foreigners talking about their countries and customs, we learn many things that we cant learn from books. 【评语】 本文第一段是总领段，点明了 English Corner 在英语学习中的地位和作用。紧接着简单介绍了 English Corner 如何在我们英语学习中发挥作用。全篇文章结构紧凑，语句连贯，无华丽词汇之堆砌，但文章中心却表达的清晰而明确。 Without you ,it would have never been possible. Thank you. 【要求】 请用英语写一篇关于你校的校园平面图（diagram 教师办公室在教学楼三楼。 学校四周是树。字数：100 【范文】 This is a diagram of our schoolyard. It is four hundred meters long and three hundred meters wide. The school gate faces the south. Our teaching building stands in the middle of our school yard. It is a building of five stories .The teachers offices are on the third floor. There is a garden in front of the teaching building. On the left of the gard