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商务酒店简介英译改进对策的中期报告 Midterm Report on Improving the English Translation of Introduction to Business Hotels Introduction This report aims to provide an update on the progress made so far in improving the English translation of the Introduction to Business Hotels document. The document is a key marketing tool for our company, and the accuracy and clarity of its translation are crucial in attracting and retaining international clientele. In the first phase of this project, our team identified several areas for improvement in the original translation and developed a plan to address them. This report provides an overview of the progress we have made towards achieving our goals. Summary of Progress 1. Terminology: One of the key issues identified in the original translation was the inconsistent use of terminology. We have addressed this by developing a glossary of key terms and ensuring that they are used consistently throughout the document. We have also checked the translations against industry standards to ensure that they are accurate and up-to-date. 2. Style and Tone: Another issue was the formal and sometimes stilted tone of the original translation, which did not reflect the friendly and welcoming tone that we strive to convey. To address this, we have rewritten several sections of the document to make them more conversational and engaging, while still maintaining a professional tone. 3. Cultural Sensitivity: We have also taken steps to ensure that the translation is sensitive to cultural differences and avoids any language or imagery that could be offensive or confusing to international audiences. This has involved consulting with native speakers of different languages and backgrounds to ensure that the translation is appropriate and respectful. 4. Proofreading and Editing: Finally, we have rigorously proofread and edited the entire document to ensure that it is free from errors and inconsistencies. We have also had the translation reviewed by an independent languag