2021届 高中英语 老人与海the old man and the sea读后续写.pptVIP

The old man and the seaErnest Hemingway——Continuation Writing Read for writing materials—细读原文，探寻写作素材 VS StoryWhenWhereWhoWhatAt sea （in the Gulf of Mexico)The old fishman named Santiago and a huge fishRead for writing materials—细读原文，探寻写作素材Writing materialsThe old man is __________ with the fishbattling After coming in empty-handed for eight-four days; At 85th day The old man is ________ with the fish The old man The fish round 1 (回合） round 2 round 3The old man pulled on him all that he could to bring him closer.Then he straightened himself and began another circle.He held on the great fish all the strain that he could....put all of his effort on......pulling with all his strengthThe fish ... righted himself and swam away...The fish righted himself and swam slowly away.Yes you are, he told himself. Youre good for ever.battling Characters of the main figures The Old man Santiagotough(坚韧的）determinedconfidentstrong-willed（意志坚强的）positiveambitious(雄心勃勃的）Characters of the main figures Useful expressions: beautiful looking看起来美丽的 straighten挺直，使变直/ weave迂回进行，穿行Vivid description: hold on抓紧/pull on用尽全力拉… turn a little on his side稍微侧身 put all of his effort on尽全力 right himself摆正自己的身子 feel himself going觉得自己快不行了… Writing Materials——原文中的写作素材 Pull,hands.Hold up, legs.Last for me, head.Last for me.Yes you are.Youre good for ever.Do you have to kill me?You are killing me.Come on and kill me.I do not care who kills who.Clear up, head!Clear up.Ill try it again.Ill try it once again.unique writing style:short, simple, repeated Writing Materials——原文中的写作素材 新高考模式下的续写要求：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Para1: After the intense struggle, the old man finally caught the fish. ____________________ Para2: A pack of sharks followed after the fish and the o