2024届高考英语应用文写作给杂志社投稿--想改变自己的某种不良习惯 讲义素材.docxVIP

【范文学习】

假如你是李华，正在英国参加交换生活动。你想参加HealthyLife杂志社组织的第二期夏令营活动。请给杂志社投稿，内容如下：

你想要改变哪种生活习惯；

为什么你想要改变；

你计划如何改变;

你希望看到什么样的结果。

注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

头脑风暴?

Whatlifestylehabityouwouldliketochange

*ComputerGameAddiction

*OvereatingUnhealthyFood

*StayingupLate

*Overspending

*havedifficultyinwakingupearly

*bealsoconstantlylate

*oftensnackonunhealthyfood.

?Whyyouwanttochange

*bealwaystiredduringthedayandoftenfeelwornout

*bestressedundertimepressurealldaylong

*bestrugglingtokeepupwithmypeers

*wanttogetmylifebackontrack

*wanttofindthedisciplinetochangemysleepinghabitsandovercomemyphoneaddiction

*alsowanttofindahealthiereatingandexerciseandsticktoit.

Howyouplantochange

*Tochangemyeatinghabits,IplantostartbybeingmoremindfulofwhatIeatandhowmuchIconsume.

*Iwillmakeaconsciousefforttoeatsmallerportionsandavoidsnackingonunhealthyfood.

*Instead,Iwillstockuponhealthysnackslikefruitsandnuts.

*Additionally,Iwillplanmymealsaheadoftimeandmakesuretoincludeabalanceofproteins,carbohydrates,andfatsineachmeal.

Whatresultyouhopetosee

*TheresultIhopetoseefromchangingmyeatinghabitsisahealthierandhappierme.

*Iwanttofeelmoreenergeticandhaveaclearermind.????

*Ialsohopetoachieveahealthierweightandreducetheriskofanypotentialhealthissues

*Iwanttoestablishasustainableandenjoyablelifestylethatincludeshealthyeatinghabits.

范文赏析

Deareditor,

IwaswalkingpastashopwindowtheotherdaywhenIsawmyreflection.Atfirst,Ididn’t?realize?itwasme.WhenIsawitwasme,IfeltsadasIamoverweight.Ididn’t?realize?howIlooked,andIreallywanttochange.Ireallylikeeating,butI?realize?Ieattoomuch,andIdon’teatgoodthings.IwanttochangebecauseIwanttobeabletolookatmyselfandfeelhappywithhowIlook.

Ialsowanttobehealthy.Myplanistochangemydietand