高中书面表达-无灵主语.pptxVIP

无灵主语他想到一个好主意。Hehad/cameupwith/putforwardagoodidea.Agoodideacameacrosshismind.Agoodideaoccurredto/struck/hithim.非人称主语句采用“无灵主语”(inanimatesubject)(没有生命力的东西)，表示抽象概念、心理感觉、事物名称或时间地点等，但谓语却常常使用“有灵动词”(animateverb)(有生命力的动作)表示人或社会团体的动作和行为，这类句子往往带有拟人化(personification)的修辞色彩。Whatinformationcanyougetbehindthewords?天黑了。It’sgettingdark.Nightapproaching,darknessruledtheforest.为什么要使用“无灵主语”？WhyIhavelearntfromlifethatsuccessisnotfinal.SoIalwaysstayhumbleandneverletitgotomyhead.thatsuccessisnotfinal.SoIalwaysstayhumbleandneverletitgotomyhead.LifehastaughtmeToavoidrepetition避免重复WhyTherehasbeenanincreaseinviolencefromillegalgunsinthepast2years.anincreaseinviolencefromillegalguns.Thepasttwoyearshaveseen/witnessedToaddtovividnessWhyIfwerelytoomuchonmouseclicking,itwillmakeuslazierbothmentallyandphysically.Toomuchreliancemakes?uslazierbothmentallyandphysically.RelyingtoomuchonmouseclickingToachieveconcision（简洁）WhyWecarriedoutmoreexperimentsandfoundsomeexcitingresults.gaveussomeexcitingresults.FurtherMoreexperimentsTodevelopobjectivityWhy1.Toavoidrepetition2.Toaddtothevividness3.Toachieveconcision（简洁）4.Todevelopobjectivity（一）表示情感状态的抽象名词作主语功能：常见情感状态的抽象名词有：joy,excitement,fear,anger,sorrow,panic,anxiety,bitterness,self-doubt,disappointment(awaveof~,asenseof)对应的动词可用：seize(某种情绪侵袭),choke(使哽咽)，floodover(充满某种情感),strike,givewayto(被…代替),tearsbintopieces,wellup(涌出),takeholdof(握住),takepossessionof(占据),sweepover(席卷)e.g.:1Panicseizedher.2JoywellsupinsideKim.他深感宽慰。Agreatsenseofrelieffloodedoverhim.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。Fearslowlycreptupon/swallowedher.（二）表示身体部位和音容等名词作主语功能：表示身体部位和音容的常见名词：face脸，laughter笑声与之对应的动词有：lightup（照亮）,brighten（照亮）,wellup(涌出）,flash（闪现）e.g.:1Herface?litup/brightenedwhenIgaveherthepresent.2Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.看到直升飞机，Jane高兴地笑了起来。Themom