写作提高三步阶梯：My-View-on-Opportunity省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖课件.pptx

写作提升三步阶梯;Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicMyViewonOpportunity.Youmustbaseyourcompositiononthefollowinginstructions(giveninChinese):

有人认为机会是极少，另一些人则认为人人都会有某种机会。你看法怎样？

写出你理由而且适当举例。在你文章结尾处不要忘记写出你结论。

Yourcompositionshouldbenolessthan120words.Remembertowriteitneatly.

;经典议论文布局模式普通为：引言—论点—论证—结论。那么模仿此法，这篇文章也能够划分为四个段落。第一段为引言段，在此段中只需写出这两种相反观点就能够了。在第二段中提出自己看法，并稍加说明。举例论证可作为第三段单独成段，充分、生动地论证自己观点。最终在结论段中，回应主题，结束作文。;TS:Differentopinionsonopportunity.

Somethink…

Othersthink…

初稿：(1)Somepeoplethinkthattheopportunityisveryfew,becausetheyhavenevermetthechance.(2)Butothersthinkthatthereareopportunitieshereandthere.(3)Everyonemaymeetsomekindofopportunitiessometimes.

;点石成金：(1)Peoplehavedifferentopinionsuponopportunity.(2)Somepeopleregardopportunityararethingthatisdifficulttoget.(3)Butotherpeoplethinkthateveryonehassomekindofopportunitiesfromtimetotime.

锦上添花：(1)Thereisnoconsensusofopinionamongpeopleastohowtoviewopportunity.(2)Somepeoplesuggestthatopportunityissorarethatonlytheluckiestpersonscanobtainthem,whilesomeotherpeoplearguethatinasenseeveryonehassomekindofopportunityfromtimetotime.;点评：

第一段先概述人们对于机会普通看法，提出主动和消极两种，为后文埋下伏笔。主动看法为我所用，大书特书；消极看法看成“靶子”，大批特批。因而，看似闲笔，实则有用；貌似涣散，实则紧凑。;TS:Iamforthelatteropinion.

“Everydoghasitsday.”

Thosewhoclaimthattheyareunlucky…

;初稿：(4)Iamforthelatteropinions.(5)Thereisawesternsaying“Everydoghasitsday.”(6)Thereareopportunitiesforeverybody.(7)Everybodyhasopportunitiestogetsuccess.(8)Thereisnoexceptiontothisrule.(9)Peoplewhoclaimthattheydon’thavegoodluckmaybethosewhoarenotabletotakeopportunities.(10)They,maybe,areunabletorecognizeorusethem.(11)Wemusttrytofinditandmakeuseofit.;点石成金：(4)Asforme,Ipreferthelatteropinion.(5)Awesternsayingtellsus,“Ever