漫画类-写作课.ppt

strike用法回顾1.Oneofthebulletsstruckherforearm.2.Hestruckasuperbshotintothenet.3.AnearthquakestruckWenchuanonMay12th,2008.4.Itwasthenthatthethoughtstruckme.5.Hedoesn’tstrikemeasamodestman.6.Theclockstruckmidnight.7.Pilotsarestrikingfora6%salaryincrease.请用英语写一篇120-150词左右的短文，简要描述漫画内容，并结合生活实际，就漫画的主题写写感想，题目自拟。(2006山东）参考词汇：公民道德—civicvirtues/morality上图反映的是部分博物馆、纪念馆、人民公园等公共场所执行国家免费开放政策后所遇到的一些新问题。请简要描述图画内容，对图画所反映的社会现象做出自己的评述并提出解决办法.作文中出现的错误汇总1.NowadaysmanyMuseums,MemorialsandParksareopentothepublicforfreeofcharge.2.Weshouldarousethepublic’sawarenessofprotectingourenvironmentfromdestroying.3.Therearesomenewproblemsarise.4.政府/时髦女郎/摘花/生活质量/和谐5.表达“德不能免”①Themoralitycan’tbeabandoned/deserted/free/lost.②Don’tbelackofmorality.③Don’tlosemorality.④Don’tbelackinginmorality.⑤Don’tgiveupmorality.⑥Youcan’tbefreeofmorality.⑦Youcan’tgetawayfromthecondemnofmorality”.好的表达1.开头：Inthepictureabove,amanispickingtheflowerswhichareforfree-sightedwhiletheflowerssay“Youcan’tgetawayfromthecondemnofmorality”.（乔凤雪）2.Afterall,theticketcanbefree,butthemoralitycan’tbefree.(王湘江)3.Wecan’temphasizetheimportanceofpromotingthepublic’sawarenessofnotpickingflowersatrandomtoomuch.（李小蒙）4.Onnoaccountcanweignoretheawarenessofmorality.(张颖)5.Thepeoplewhohavelosthismoralitylikethemanshouldbetoblame.(王旭明)6.Theimpliedmeaningofthispictureshouldbetakenintoconsiderationseriously.（陈菁）7.Thebehaviorhasanegativeeffectonoursociety,sowe’reexpectedtotakethepublicplacesseriously.（刘祥慧）8.Ifweleaveitalone,thingswillgetworseandworse.(方丽婷)9.Facedwithsuchadifficultproblem,weshouldhaveadetermine