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读后续写精批精改系列7：珍贵的地毯

●原文呈现:

?阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

Hollywasconfusedassheopenedthebirthdaypresentfromherbestfriend，Susan—itwasatwelvebyeightinchdarkbluecarpet.Her“thankswashardlyheardasHollytriedhardnottoshowherdisappointment.

Thenextmorning，IcarriedakitchenrubbishbagoutsideonlytofindSusanscarpetlyingthere.Iimmediatelyreachedinandpulleditoutoftherubbishcan.Aftergivingitabrushing，Ibroughtitintothehouseandputitaway.

BeforeHollysbirthday，Susanhadbeenaregularvisitorinourhome.ButsuddenlyIrealizedthatithadbeennearlythreeweekssincewedheardthementionofSusansname.Imissedherwarmsmileverymuch.

“Susaninvitedustogotoherhouseafterschooltomorrow.Hollysaidassoonasshearrivedfromschool.Fromhervoice，Isensedshewaspleasedwiththeinvitation.

Weweretravelingalongthewindingcountryroadthatledtoherhousethefollowingday.OnthewaySusantalkednervouslyaboutherfostermomandtheseventeencatstheyhadtakeninandcaredfor.

Whenwecametoastop，Susansfostermom—whointroducedherselfasGlenda—gaveusawarmwelcome.Susanguidedusthroughthehouse.Sheproudlyshowedusherroom，whichwasonlydecoratedwithsomeshabbyusedfurniture.

lfollowedSusansfostermom，Glenda，intothekitchen.Afterclearingasmallarea，Glendapoureduseachacupofblackcoffeewithhertremblinghand.Thenshebegantorelaxaswedrankourcoffeeandchattedabouthercats.

?HereyesshoneassheshowedherfondnessforSusan.Butherexpressionturnedbluewhenshereferredtothegirlspast.Inaninstant，Icametorespectthiswarmheartedwomanwhohadopenedherhometoayoungergirlandtriedhardtomakeadifferenceinherlife.

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Asdaylightbegantofade，weofferedourthanksforthevisitandsaidgoodbye.

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Isthiswhatyouwerelookingfor?”

注意:

1．续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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