读后续写高分技巧---结尾句式主题升华句.docxVIP

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读后续写高分技巧结尾句式主题升华句

●结尾写法句式:

1.对比强调:ltisnot...thatcount/matter.Its

2.倒装句,引出结尾句:NeverhadDorareceivedsuchagift.Speechless,she...

3.what主语从句表强调:Whatmatters/countsmostis...

4.呼应首段(回忆体):Whenlookingbackonthestory,sbstillfeel...

5.悟道理:Fromthis,sblearnedwhattrue+主旨名词was:道理句子

6.写景:Feeling+theadj.+wind/airlsunlight+固定动词ing,sbdosth

7.情感升华：Seeingsth,Ifeltasifithadbeendoingandsaying,””

看到某物,感觉某物好像在做某动作,并且说“（突出主题的话）”

8.对话结尾:神态,动作，动词说ing,“”

●对比强调:

句式①∶句首V-ing，并列结构;下句点明前者(theformer)/后者(thelatter)更重要

Doingsthisnotonlyaboutdoingsthbutalsodoingsth.Andactually,whatreally/trulymattersisthelatter.

句式②:ltisnot...thatcount/matter/makeasignificantdifference.Its...

Intheend,itsnottheyearsinyourlifethatcount.Itsthelifeinyouryears.”

句式③:Dont/Neverdosth...butdosth...

Dontjudgeeachdaybytheharvestyoureapbutbytheseedsthatyouplant.(收获/播种)

Neverbeafraidtodogood,butalwaysfeartodoevil.(永远不要害怕做好事，而要害怕做坏事)

句式④:强调句:ltis+名词+that+谓语(宾语)

ltisloveandcarethatmatterthemostinafamilyrelationship.

Itwashisbraveheartandstrongfaiththatcouldmakesomethingunusualhappenfinally.

●倒装句,引出结尾句:

倒装句,否定前置:Neverhadsbdonesth+(下句)人物动作定格

最终结尾句:“并列形容词，sbdosth，独立主格(感官神态)”

1.NeverhadDorareceivedsuchagift.Speechlessandhappy,sheheldhersontightlyintoherams,withtearswellingupinhereyes.

2.Neverhadwefallenintosuchadangerousdilemma.Delightedandrelieved,weheldeachothertightlyinarms,withtearsofecstacywellingupinoureyes.

●what主语从句表强调:

Whatmatters/countsmostis(insteadof...)

Whatittakestoconqueryourfearareactions,determinationandoptimism.

●呼应首段(回忆体):

句式①:Adv,the+adj.+无灵主语stilllingered(beengraved)inonesmind.”(印在)(注意:adv/adj.呼应首段，与主旨情感一致)

Interestingly,thefunnystorywasstilldeeplyengravedinmymind.

Thefunnystorytaughtusthatnevershouldwejudgeabookbyitscover.

Thenarrowescapemade