满分写作周周赢 PPTWednesday　考场作文研析 (4).pptx

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赢在微点高中英语满分写作周周赢Week14报道/宣传稿优秀品行类读后续写

Wednesday考场作文研析Week14配套使用《满分微练》第一部分10分钟随堂微练14

读后续写满分技巧14合理设计危机营造故事冲突故事高潮指故事达到最紧张或扣人心弦的部分,有时是剧情的“危机”点。有时它只是达到关键时刻或者转折点时,发生了什么事,或人物必须做出决定,从而导致某个结果。营造故事发展的高潮可通过营造冲突实现。可通过4种方式营造冲突:①人物之间的冲突(人物观点不同,竞争需要等);②人物与环境之间的冲突,如下文可描写天气变得更加恶劣;③放大内心活动冲突;④增加困难,让人物克服挑战,如2020年浙江卷续写第二段首句中提到“verymoment”,第一段尾句可营造冲突,描述北极熊马上要突破围栏冲进来了,把“verymoment”设计为整个经历中最危险的时刻。

好题探索阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。OnewindydayinMarch,KittyMillerwasonherwaytoschoolwhensheglancedintoastorewindowandsawagreatpileoflovelyredapples.③“Oh,”sheexclaimed(惊呼).“Howlovely!⑥IfonlyMammacouldhaveone!⑦”Immediately,thestoreownerrecognizedthefamiliargirlandaskedhertopickone.Kittyjustshookherheadandranawayshyly.①Kitty’smotherwasextremelypoor.ShehadbeenadressmakereversinceKitty’sfatherdied,andhadtoworkhardtoearnalivingforherselfandKitty.Unfortunately,shehadrecentlybecomeverysickandhadtolieinbedalldaylong.WhenKittywasawayatschool,thehousewasincrediblycoldandcheerless.Kittytookgreatcareofhermother.Shecookedherfood,mostlysoup.Theycouldnotaffordfreshfruit.Kittywouldevensingtohermotheratnight.(插叙段)

WhenKittyreachedtheschoolthatday,herthoughtswerefullofhersickmotherandthelovelyredapples.Shewasusuallyanexcellentstudent,butthatdayshemadesomanymistakesthattheteacherlookedatherinsurprise.⑤Thelittlegirlcouldonlysitatherdesk,withherbookbeforeher,anddreamofthoseredapples.Whenschoolwasdismissed,Kittystartedslowlyhomeward.④Shehadwalkedonlyashortdistancewhenshesawamaninfrontofherdrophiswallet.Runningquicklyforward,shepickeditup.②ThewalletfeltquiteheavyinKitty’slittlehand.“Theremustbeagooddealofmoneyinit,”thoughtKitty.“HowIwishIcouldkeepit,sothatIwouldthenbeabletopurchaseared