2024年高考英语（新课标1卷）书面表达试题评析课件.pptx

2024高考英语新课标I卷应用文写作

适用地区：山东、河北、湖北、湖南、福建、广东、江苏、浙江

第三部分写作（共两节，满分40分）第一节（满分15分）假如你是李华，你的美术老师上周五在公园带你们上了一节美术课，完成了一个美术作品。请你写信给外国笔友，讲述你完成的作品及感受。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearSusan,__________________________Yours,LiHua

【语篇分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写信给外国笔友，讲述自己完成的一件美术作品及感受。文章的人称应为第一人称，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主。体裁人称时态主要内容书信第一人称一般过去时、一般现在时1.讲述自己完成的一件美术作品2.自己的感受

【遣词造句】词汇运用完成：complete周围的：surrounding特色：flavour咨询：consult作品：presentation令人信服的：convincing优美：elegance花朵：blossom令人激动的：thrilling成果丰硕的：fruitful从事：bededicatedto不时地：fromtimetotime

亮点句型1.I’mwritingtosharemyadventureinanartclasswhichtookplaceinaparkwithyou.（定语从句）2.LastFriday,ourartteachertookourclasstoHongxingPark,locatedonatwistingrivertogiveusaclass.（非谓语动词短语作定语）3.Intheclass,theteachergotustoprepareanartwork,eithershowingthelandscapeordrawingsomebeautifulflowersandinsects.4.WhatIwasdedicatedtoisapeachtree.（名词性从句）5.Howthrillingandfruitfultheclasswas!（感叹句）6.Notonlydidwestudentsgetsomehands-onexperience,butwealsodevelopedourinterestinbothartandnature!（倒装句）【遣词造句】

范文1

DearSusan,LastFriday,ourartteachertookourclasstoHongxingPark,tocompleteanartworkbasedonthesurroundingscenery.WhatIwasdedicatedtoisapeachtree.Toshowthedelicacyandeleganceoftheblossom,Iaddedsomebeestoitscentre,enjoyingtheflavour.Ofcourse,Istoppedfromtimetotimetoconsultmyteachertomakemypresentationmoreconvincing.Howthrillingandfruitfultheclasswas!Notonlydidwestudentsgetsomehands-onexperience,butwealsodevelopedourinterestinbothartandnature!Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua

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DearSusan,

Imwritingtosharemyadventureinanartclasswhichtookplaceinaparkwithyou.

LastFriday,ourartteachertookourclasstoHongxingPark,locatedonatwistingrivertogiveusaclass.Intheclass,theteachergotustopre