2025届高考英语复习 读后续写六、提升作文颜值 导学案.docx

读后续写六、提升作文颜值

一、巧用形容词

Useadjectivestoconveyavividpicture!

1.Janeroseatthebreakofday.

2.Fortunately,wegotinthehelicopter

3.Shebegansobbing.

4.Marysatstillagainstthedoor.

5.Wewerethrilledtoseetheboywasrescued.Wejumpedtoourfeet.

6.Shewasexhausted.Shestillkeptyellingatthetopofherlung.

7.YoucantmaginethatIwasveryanxiouswhenIknewyouwereinabadmood.

→升级版:

1.Janeroseatthebreakofday,_hungryandthirsty.

2.Fortunately,wegotinthehelicopter,_safeandsound.

3.Frightenedandfrustrated,Shebegansobbing.

4.Lostintheaght,Marysatstillagainstthedoor.

5.Sothrilledwerewetoseetheboywasrescuedthatwejumpedtoourfeet.

6.Exhaustedas/thoughshewas,shestillkeptyellingatthetopofherlung.

7.YoucantimaginehowanxiousIwaswhenIknewyouwereinabadmood.

→句式总结！

①主谓...，adj(短语)

②adj(短语)，主谓

③so+adj+that...

④adj+as/thoughsbis/was...

⑤How+adj.+主谓

Practice

1.Mary满脸通红、气喘吁吁地从大门口跑了进来。

2.Jack是如此的焦急以至于他在他的房间里来回踱步。

3.困在迷雾中，我什么也做不了，只能哭泣，无助又失落。

答案:

Flushedandbreathless,Maryrushedoutofthegate.

SoanxiousasJackthathepacedupanddowninhisroom.

Trappedinthedensemist,Icoulddonothingbutburstintotears,helplessanddisappointed.

二、活用副词

①副词使表达更具活力

②副词突出画面感

例如:

1.Tearsofjoyfloodedhereyesassheprayedsilently.

2.Shesstolenmywatch!”Leesaidangrily(怒地说),Itwentmissingatschoolyesterday.

3.Deeplymoved(深地被感动)，weappreciatedhimandfeltasenseofwarmth.

4.Hopelesslystandingontheroadside(绝望地站在路边),Iwassosadthatthetearswerefilledwithmyeyes.

5.Myparentsscoldedmeforrunningoutofthehousesecretly(偷地跑出房间)butwerealsogladthatIwasnotseriouslyinjured(我受伤并不很严重).

6.Totally/Absolutely/Completelyfrightened(完全被吓着)Macrodehisbikeasquicklyashecould.

三、非谓语动词

1.动词的一种形式，可以充当出了谓语以外的其他成分。

它不受人称和数的限制。在句中起n.adj.adv.的作用。

1.Hewastremblinginablanketandhesaid,“I’mcold.”

=Tremblinginablanket,hesaid,“Imco