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SomethingaboutEnglishWriting;2007年中考作文评分标准;A、喧宾夺主离题万里

;WeareChinese,sowemustknowtheOlympicGameswillbeholdinBeijing2008.Weareproudofit.Onehundredyearsago.TherewasapersonaskedalltheChinese.HesaidwhenChinacanholdabiggameslikeOlympicGames.Nowwecansaywewilldoitinhundredsofdays.So,ifweshoulddosomethingfortheOlympicGames.Wecantakeexercisehard.Andcleanthepark.Letourcitymorecleanandbeautiful.Althoughwecanlittlethingsforit,wemustdoit.Ithinkit’sourduty.Takingexerciseanhoureveryday….Ibelieveinsomeyears.WecanlikeLiuXiangZhangYining….Theyareheroes.Ithinkwearealsoheroes.Chinesepeopleareallheroes,aren’tthey.(141词〕;B、生硬造词弄巧成拙

;C、层次不清颠三倒四

;D、时态混乱、书写糟糕

;1〕认真审题,紧跟要求

提供情景的方式：图画、图表、提纲、短文

写作要点：内容、体裁、格式、具体要求;2〕把握时态，注重语法

;3〕语言得当，力求纯粹

;4〕连贯流畅，一气呵成

;5〕词数适中，言简意赅;6〕拼写正确，注重习惯

Tusday,truly,helth,

规定大写的地方，如专有名词、星期、月份、句子开头等，常常忘记大写。

标点符号也有错误，有的学生一逗到底，有的把句号写成“。”;7〕书写标准，卷面整洁

一篇书写工整、美观的书面表达，能给人愉悦的感觉；一篇内容不错，但书写潦草的习作会给人欠佳的印象。近年书面表达评分标准规定，对于字迹潦草，影响表达的文章应降一个档次给分。这就提醒我们：书写时要防止潦草凌乱、忽大忽小、词距太紧、字迹模糊等毛病，要写清楚、工整、标准的字体，为你书面表达成功再添一臂之力。

;Acompositionfromthetestpaper;Thanksforjoiningus!;Moreandmorekindsofsportsinourschool,likepingpong,basketball,footballandmore.;ManyAmericangirlstakepartinsports，dancingandsinginggroupswhilemanyChinesegirlstakepartinstudygroups

Manystudentstakepartinsports,dancingandsinginggroups.;Thestudentsdon’thavemuchtimetoplaywiththeirfriends.

Nowwehavemuchtimetoplaysports.

Itbroughtmehappiness.IwanttodoeverythingIcantogoonhelpingthosechildren.”

Itbringsushappiness.

Fridayafternoon，youcangoto

playsoccer C.playbasketball

OnFridayafternoon,wecanplaysoccerandplaybasketball.;That’sthemostimportantwork

Doingsportsisthemostimportantworkatschool.

hastoomanyactivities

Nowwehavetoomanyactivitiesatschool.

Moreandmorekidsbeco