上海松江洞泾学校九年级(1)班.ppt

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上海松江洞泾学校九年级(1)班.ppt

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RevisionofWritingByHeShunzhiMay8,2008

I.WritingAnEvent

AnUnforgettableDayIsawanunforgettablethingtheotherday.Itwas10a.m.Anoldladywalkedoutofthebankwithahandbaginherhand.Soshewasstandinginfrontofthebank.Suddenlyamanrobbedtheoldladyofherhandbag.Heranawayquickly.Theoldladyshouted,“Stopthief!Stopthief!”.Someoneimmediatelydialed110.Twoyoungmenbegantorunafterthethief.Innotime,thethiefwascaughtandthepolicemenarrived.Theoldladythankedtheyoungmenagainandagain.IthinkthetwoyoungmenwerebraveandIshouldlearnfromthem.

Questions:When?Where?Who?What?How?

Discussion:MyBirthdayPartyQuestions:Whendidyouhavetheparty?Wheredidyouhaveit?Whomdidyouinvite?Whatdidyoudoattheparty?Howdidyoufeel?

MyBirthdayPartyLastSundaywasmy16thbirthday.Ihadapartyathome.Iinvitedmanyfriendstomyhome.Theygavemealotoflovelypresents.Tomgavemeabook.Alicegavemeacard.Wewatchedsomecartoonstogetherandplayedsomeinterestinggames.Thenmymothermadeusanicecake.Myfriendssang“HappyBirthday”andweatethecakehappily.Wehadagoodtimeattheparty.Ifeltveryhappy.(80words)

GroupA:PlantingTreesGroupB:OurSportsMeetingGroupC:ATriptoShanghaiZoo

PlantingTreesMarch12isTree-plantingDay.OnMarch12thisyear,wewenttoanewparktoplanttrees.Look!Thesunwasshining.Howhardwewereworking!Someweredigging,somewereputtingthetreesintheholes,otherswerecarryingwaterandwateringthetrees.Thoughwewereverytired,wefelthappy,becauseweknowthattreesareourfriendsandthebestpollutionfighters.Nextspringwewillagaingotheretoplanttrees.(80words)

OurSportsMeetingLastFridayourschoolheldasportsmeeting.Manystudentsinourclassenteredforit.LiPinrunsfast,sohetookpartinthe800-meterrace.Hewonthesecondplace.WeiFangtookpar