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2023年6月高考新全国I卷续写解析
WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaid
nowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymy
secondlanguage.Writingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresent
mypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughed
harderthanhedid.did.
Iloveyourstories.Ifyourewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthisthis
Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.
IchosePaulRevereshorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(银匠)inBostonwho
rodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswereing.My
storywouldestraightfromthehorsesmouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyone
elseschoice.Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?
Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,like
Revereshorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrect
mygrammar.IcheckedoutahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewof
them.
WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andandNow,
writeitagain.writeitagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinning
hadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidntwin,Iwouldntcare.
Paragraph1:Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.
Paragraph2:Iwenttomyteachersofficeaftertheawardpresentation.
辅助阅读
1.applyoneself：努力，使专注
2.shot：尝试，Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis:我认为你在这方面
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