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ThestorywassetinNewYorkinthelate19thcenturywhenPneumonia（肺炎）wasadeadlydisease.AyounggirlbythenameofJohnsyhadfallenillandwasdyingofpneumonia.

Shewatchedtheleavesfallfromavineoutsidethewindowofherroom,anddecidedthatwhenthelastleafdropped,shetoowoulddrop,anddie.WhileSue,Johnsy`ssistertriedtotellhertostopthinkinglikethat,Johnsywasdeterminedtodiewhenthelastleaffell.

AnoldFrenchman,namedBehrman,wasanartist(andaverybadonetoo)wholivednearbyandwasSuestutor,andwhohadbeenclaimingthathewouldpaintamasterpiece,eventhoughhehadneverevenattemptedtostart.

Suewenttohim,andtoldhimthathersisterwasdyingofpneumonia,andthatJohnsyclaimedthatwhenthelastleaffelloffofavineoutsideherwindow,shewoulddie.Behrmanlaughedatthisasfoolishness,butdecidedtoseeJohnsyandthevine(藤）.

Inthenight,averybadstormcameandwindwashowlingandrainwassplatteringagainstthewindow.SueclosedthecurtainsandtoldJohnsytogotosleep,eventhoughtherewerestillfourleavesleftonthevine.JohnsyprotestedbutSueinsistedondoingsobecauseshedidn`twantJohnsytoseethelastleaffall.

Inthemorning,Johnsywantedtoseethevine,tobesurethatalltheleavesweregone,buttotheirsurprise,therewasstilloneleafleft.WhileJohnsywassurprisedthatitisstillthere,sheinsisteditwouldfallthatday.But