05 建议信——2025年高考备考英语应用文写作快速突破 答案版.docx

05.建议信——2025年高考备考英语应用文写作快速突破

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【最新真题、模拟题、联考试题】

1．DearChris,

ImLiJim,astudentatChenguangHighSchool.It’sourgreatpleasuretohaveyouvisitourschoolandgivealectureonwesternartduringthecomingsummervacation.

Whenitcomestomysuggestions,Iamquiteinterestedinwesternmusic,andexpectthatyoucoulddeliverthelectureonthistopic.Servedasabridge,westernmusicprovidesusteenagerswiththeopportunitytobroadenourhorizonsandhaveabetterunderstandingonculturediversities.Italsogivesusstrengthandhopewhenweareovercomingdifficulties.

Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyadvice,andIhopethatIcangainmoreknowledgethroughthelecture.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Thankyouforyourtime.

Yours,

LiJin

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英方教师Chris写信，就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出意见。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

做演讲：givealecture→makeaspeech

提供：providesb.withsth.→refersb.sth.

机会：opportunity→chance

采纳建议：takeone’sadvice→followone’sadvice

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Servedasabridge,westernmusicprovidesusteenagerswiththeopportunitytobroadenourhorizonsandhaveabetterunderstandingonculturediversities.

拓展句：Westernmusic，whichisservedasabridge，providesusteenagerswiththeopportunitytobroadenourhorizonsandhaveabetterunderstandingonculturediversities.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】Whenitcomestomysuggestions,Iamquiteinterestedinwesternmusic,andexpectthatyoucoulddeliverthelectureonthistopic.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】Italsogivesusstrengthandhopewhenweareovercomingdifficulties.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）

2．DearMike,

Learningyou’regoingtosignupfortheshortvideocompetitiononthethemeofAmazingChina,I’mwritingtosharemyideaswithyou.

IfIwereyou,IwouldnothesitatetoshootashortvideoaboutChina’ssmartagriculture.Nowadays,youcanseemodernfarmersusingcutting-edgetechnologiesanddevicesforagriculturalproduction,monitoringandmanagement.Thankstothis,theeffic