9读后续写微技能--巧用修辞.pptx

读后续写微技能;;二.commoncategoriesofrhetoricdevices;;;;;likeanoldtreeblossomingagain:就像古树又开花

likearatonthehotbrick:如同热锅上的蚂蚁

likeamouseseeingthecat:就像老鼠见了猫

likearatcrossingthestreet:就像是过街老鼠

likeafishoutofwater:形容浑身不自在

likeawolfstalkingintheforest:就像穿行在森林里的恶狼

shakelikealeaf:怕极了

;;;;;;;;;5.parallelism(排比);四、rhetoricdevicesinwriting(1);1.和着美妙的旋律，烛光轻快地跳跃着，好像在鼓励Michael赶紧迈出勇敢的那一步。(拟人/明喻)

ThecandleflameblissfullydancedtothebeautifulmelodyasifitwereencouragingMichaeltomoveforwardbravely.

2.眼睛里充盈着闪耀的星星，Michael轻轻地握住了Jane的手，抛出了那个问题。(暗喻)

Witheyesbrimmingwithsparklestars,MichaelheldJanesrighthandandpoppedtheveryquestion.

3.泪水像小溪一样流下脸颊，Emily重重地点了点头,“我愿意！”(夸张)

“Yes!”WithtearsofexcitementstreamingdownEmilyscheeks,shenoddedfirmly.;4.Michael说：“我知道，我们彼此了解的时间还不够长。在这眨眼之间，我们还经历了一些非常意想不到的事。就好比这天气，你以为这场风暴已过去，可谁知另一场又来了。这也是我，如此确信对你有感觉的原因。因为只要和你在一起……我还要继续说。没人曾像你这样让我感受到关爱、安心和理解。如果你愿意的话。我愿意用余生为你带来同样的快乐。艾米丽·索恩，你愿意嫁给我吗?”(夸张/明喻/排比)

Michaelsaidwithaffection,“Iknowwehaventknowneachotherforverylong,andwevetodealwithsomeprettyunexpectedthingsintheblinkofaneye.Sortoflikethisweather.Youthinkonestormspassed,andanotherstormsonthehorizon……whichiswhyImsureaboutthewayIfeelforyou,causeaslongasIhaveyou……I’mnotstopping.Noonesevermademefeelaslovedandassafeandunderstoodasyoudo.Ifyouletme……Idliketospendtherestofmylifemakingyouashappyasyouvemademe.EmilyThorne,willyoumerryme?”;ThecandleflameblissfullydancedtothebeautifulmelodyasifitwereencouragingMichaeltomoveforwardbravely.

Witheyesbrimmingwithsparklestars,MichaelheldJanesrighthandandpoppedtheveryquestion.Michaelsaidwithaffection,“Iknowwehaventknowneachotherforverylong,andwevetodealwithsomeprettyunexpectedthingsintheblinkofaneye.Sortoflikethisweather.Youthinkonestormspassed,andanother