人教版高考英语一轮总复习精品课件 写作专项 Step 2 第一讲 星光闪耀的亮点词汇.ppt

写作专项第一讲星光闪耀的亮点词汇英语角度(一)“语”众不同写作时,恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达,会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。①(2020全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)Tobehonest,hishelphasagreatimpactonme.→Tobehonest,hisassistancehasagreatimpactonme.②I’mbusywithmylessonsnow,fortheCollegeEntranceExamination,whichisveryimportanttome,isnear.→I’moccupiedwithmylessonsnow,fortheCollegeEntranceExamination,whichisofgreatimportancetome,isaroundthecorner.角度(二)更新换代写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语,要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式多样,也是高级用法。We’vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingbesidetheoldoneandwe’vealsobuiltalibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe.→We’vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingbesidetheoldoneandwe’vealsosetupalibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe.角度(三)巧妙互用一般情况下短语优先,应多使用短语、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动,可以“一词传神”。(2019全国Ⅲ卷,书面表达)Knowingthatyoulikeclassicalmusic,I’dliketoinviteyoutojoinmeandwelcomeyoutoshowyourperformance.→Knowingthatyouarefondofclassicalmusic,I’dliketoinviteyoutojoinmeandwelcomeyoutoshowyourperformance.角度(四)低级淘汰为了表现自己的语言功底,吸引阅卷老师的眼球,应避免反复使用初中阶段学过的词汇,尽量使用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。①(2020新高考全国Ⅰ卷,应用文写作)200studentsfromallgradestookpartinthisrunningrace.→200studentsfromallgradeswereinvolvedinthisrunningrace.②Second,Iamtryingmybesttoacquiretheessentialknowledgeandskillsconcerningmyposition.→Second,Iamsparingnoefforttoacquiretheessentialknowledgeandskillsconcerningmyposition.雕词琢句使用恰当的高级词汇完成下列句子1.I(别无选择)buttoinsistonrunningtothedestinationatthattime.?2.Thatwewonfirstplace(可归因于)anumberoffactors.?3.(我突然想到)thattraditionalcultureliketeacultureisofgreatcharmandhugevalue.?4.(最后),Iworkedoutthedifficultproblemwhich(对我来说极其困难).?hadnoalternativecouldbeattributedtoItsuddenlyoccurstomeEventuallywasextremelytoughforme5.我希望你能考虑我的请求。6.记住,在中国,正确地使用筷子是很重要的。Ihopeyoucantak