人教版高中英语选择性必修第二册精品课件 Unit 5 写作指导 如何写一个关于实施急救的故事.pptVIP

示例写作步骤【写作要求】假设你和你班同学李华从开水房打完开水,在回宿舍的路上,李华的热水瓶突然破裂,开水烫伤了李华的脚。你对他进行了必要的急救。请用英语写一篇80词左右的文章,向学校英文报投稿讲述这件事,内容包括:1.事情发生的经过;2.你是如何实施急救的(冷水冲洗、送医院做进一步处理等);3.对掌握一定急救知识的重要性的认识。参考词汇:开水房boilerhouse热水瓶thermosbottle【审题谋篇】体裁记叙文人称第一、三人称为主时态一般过去时话题实施急救框架第一段:介绍事故原因第二段:实施急救的过程第三段:总结与反思【遣词造句】1.词汇①爆炸?②严重的?③治疗?④寻找?⑤在这种情况下?explosionseveretreatmentsearchforinsuchacase2.句式(1)要点翻译①我和李华从锅炉房取热水后正在往回走。LiHuaandIwere_____________________________________________________________________________________________________.?②突然一声爆炸把我吓了一跳。Suddenlyasoundofexplosion____________________.?on our way back from the boiler house after fetching some hot waterscared me③我尽力保持镇定,与此同时,疯狂地搜寻着我从急救课上学到的知识。I_______________________________,andatthesametime,Icrazilysearchedfor________________________________________________________.?④那时我意识到关于急救的基本知识能够产生多么大的影响。Ithenwasaware____________________________________________________________canmake.?managed to stay calmwhat I had learnt from my first-aid classwhat a difference the basic knowledge of first aid(2)句式升级⑤用when引导的时间状语从句合并句①和句②。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________⑥用现在分词短语作伴随状语改写句③。___________________________________________________________________________________⑦用倒装句改写句④。_________________________________________________________________________LiHuaandIwereonourwaybackfromtheboilerhouseafterfetchingsomehotwaterwhensuddenlyasoundofexplosionscaredme.Imanagedtostaycalm,crazilysearchingforwhatIhadlearntfrommyfirst-aidclass.OnlythenwasIawarewhatadifferencethebasicknowledgeoffirstaidcanmake.【妙笔成篇】Thatday,LiHuaandIwereonourwaybackfromtheboilerhouseafterfetchingsomeh