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Atlast,thoughstillhalfdrownedinthewater,hefoundhimselfsafeforatime,yetfarfromafinalrescue.AboutonehourlaterGilbertraisedhishead,andthemoonwaslowinthewest.Abovethenoiseofthewaterandthewhistleofthewind,heheardafamiliarsound—thehigh,sharpneigh(嘶鸣)ofahorse.ItwasRogerthatheheard!Helookedaroundandsawthatamanonhorsebackinthefloodedgrasslanddrewnearer,withRogeraside.Hecriedaloud—astrange,unnaturalcry.Thehorsemanheardit,andsooncametohisrescue.However,Gilbertwastooexhaustedtothankhim,oraskhowhehadfoundhimandwheretheyweregoing.“Here’syoursavior(救星)!”saidtheman,pattingRoger’sshoulder.????Hearingthesewords,Gilbertdidnotspeakbuttwolargetearsslowlyrolleddownhischeeks.????写作指导原文讲述了Gilbert被洪水困住,等待救援,而他的马儿Roger被激流冲走后,带着一位骑马人过来救了他。根据三处关键信息,即:原文最后一句“However,Gilbertwastooexhaustedtothankhim,oraskhowhehadfoundhimandwheretheyweregoing.”,续写第一段提示句“‘Here’syoursavior(救星)!’saidtheman,pattingRoger’sshoulder.”以及续写第二段提示句“Hearingthesewords,Gilbertdidnotspeakbuttwolargetearsslowlyrolleddownhischeeks.”,可以大致确定续写的基本思路。续写第一段:主要围绕“骑马人讲述Roger如何带他来到浅滩的过程”来构思。续写第二段:主要围绕“Gilbert对马儿Roger的真情如何流露”来构思。范文展示“Here’syoursavior(救星)!”saidtheman,pattingRoger’sshoulder.Headded,“ItwasthroughhimthatIfoundyou.Ataboutthreeo’clock,Iheardahorsebeforethedoor,neighing.Itssoundwasratherunusual,soIgotup,lookedoutofthewindow,dressedmyselfandwentout.WhenItriedtocatchhim,herandownthepathjustabit,andthencamebackactingratherstrangely.SoIrodemyhorseandfollowedhim.Aheadwentyours,stoppingeveryminutetolookaroundandseeifIfollowed.ThehorsehadmegoonandontillIfo