人教版高中英语必修第一册精品课件 Unit 3 写作指导 有关健康的小语篇.ppt

示例写作步骤【写作要求】假定你是张伟,以前喜欢吃垃圾食品,不锻炼,导致体重超重,进而造成了一系列身体不适。但是经过一年的节食减肥和经常锻炼,你现在已经减肥成功,精力充沛。请写一封邮件,把你的前后身体变化分享给为肥胖而苦恼的美国笔友Andy。注意:词数80左右。DearAndy,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,ZhangWei【审题谋篇】体裁电子邮件人称第一人称时态一般现在时和一般过去时话题有关健康的报告框架第一段:以前的健康状况以及存在的问题;第二段:现在的健康状况以及采取的改变措施;第三段:比较前后健康状况,总结我们应该如何改善生活方式,提升健康水平。【遣词造句】1.词汇(1)与……分享?(2)锻炼?(3)增加体重?(4)气喘吁吁?(5)感到精力充沛?(6)坚持平衡膳食?share...with...workoutputonweightoutofbreathfeelenergeticsticktoabalanceddiet2.句式(1)要点翻译①我和你一起分享我的健康状况的变化。Iyou.?②我以前喜欢吃垃圾食品,不喜欢锻炼。Ijunkfoodandoutbefore.?③我体重增加得很快。Iquickly.?sharemychangeofhealthconditionswithlikedeatingdislikedworkingputonweight④我爬楼梯的时候气喘吁吁。IwhileIwasclimbingthestairs.?⑤只有当我们坚持均衡饮食和锻炼才能保持健康。Wecankeepfitonlywhenweandworkingout.?wasoutofbreathsticktoabalanceddiet(2)词句升级⑥把句②和句③升级为as引导的原因状语从句⑦把句④升级为省略句⑧把句⑤升级为倒装句AsIlikedeatingjunkfoodanddislikedworkingoutbefore,Iputonweightquickly.Iwasoutofbreathwhileclimbingthestairs.Onlywhenwesticktoabalanceddietandworkingoutcanwekeepfit.【妙笔成篇】DearAndy,?Now,Isharemychangeofhealthconditionswithyou.AsIlikedeatingjunkfoodanddislikedworkingoutbefore,Iputonweightquickly.Asaresult,Iwasoutofbreathwhileclimbingthestairs.Ifelttiredallday.Adoctoradvisedmetobeonadietaswellasdosportsregularly.Ifollowedhisadvice.Fromthenon,Iworkedouteverydayandcutthejunkfoodout.Ayearlater,Ibecamesliman