【读后续写】 2021学年第一学期五校联考高三年级英语读后续写讲评 名师课件-许丽君 (1).pptxVIP

2021学年第一学期五校联考读后续写解析KatieKept‘Losing’HerLunch凯蒂总是弄丢她的午餐杭州二中许丽君

第二节读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Katiewasexceptionallysmall.Wewereinthefifthgrade,butshewasasshortasathirdgrader.Althoughherbodywassmall,Katiewasbigatheart.Shehadasharpmind,too.Sometimesshegothershareofteasing,butKatieknewhowtohandleit.AllthekidswhoknewKatielikedheralot.Katielovedhelpingothersintheclass,sowheneversomeonewasstuckonthecomputerhealwayscalledherforhelpandadvice.Katielovedjokesandshealwayshadajokethatwouldcheersomeoneupwheneverhewasdown.Shewastrulythemostkindandgenerousfriendanyonecouldaskfor.典题示例

Buttheotherdayshewasinbigtrouble.Shewassuchasweetgirl;athird-gradeteacheralwaysdreamedofhavingaclassroomfilledwithstudentslikeKatie.Shewasnevereveradiscipline（纪律）problem.Ijustcouldn’timaginewhyshehadmadeherparentssoangry.ItseemedthatKatiehadbeenrunningup（积欠）sizablechargesinthelunchroom.HerparentsexplainedthatKatiebroughtagreathomemadeluncheachday,andtherewasnoreasonforhertobuyschoollunch.Theyassumedasit-downwithKatiewouldsolvetheproblem,butfailed.Sotheyaskedmetohelpthemgettothebottomofthissituation.Sothenextday,IaskedKatietomyoffice.“Whyareyoucharging（记账）lunches,Katie?Whathappenstoyourhomemadelunch?”Iasked.“Iloseit,”Sheresponded.Ileanedbackinmychairandsaid,“Idon’tbelieveyou,Katie.”Shedidn’tcare.“Issomeonestealingyourlunch,Katie?”Itookanewtrack.“No.Ijustloseit,”shesaid.Well,therewasnothingelseIcoulddo.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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