高考英语写作专题经典讲座十四 非完整句的错误.docx

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写作专题十四非完整句的错误

非完整句的错误

一个完整的句子应该有完整的结构来表达完整的意思。有的考生喜欢写很长的句子来表达意思，最后发现句子结构不完整。这与获取高分的原意背道而驰。例如，

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一．结构完整句的要求

所有英文句子都必须符合两条定律：“1+N”与“M-1=引导词”。只要违反这两条定律的都叫“非完整句”。例如

1.Hefailedtopasstheexamination.Whichdisappointedhisparents.

2.Ithinkthisfilmispoor.Eventhoughsomanypeopleenjoyseeingit.

3.With2000juniorstudentsand1000seniorstudents.Ourschoolhadbecomerathercrowded.

4.Theygotupveryearlythatdayadleftatonce.Hopingtocatchthe7:00traintoParis.

5.TheyplannedatriptoLondon.Atriptogetmanynewexperiences.

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上述句子全部违反“M-1=引导词”定律，可以应用“M-1=引导词”定律，修改为复合句，如下：

1.Hefailedtopasstheexamination,whichdisappointedhisparents.

2.Ithinkthisfilmispoor,eventhoughsomanypeopleenjoyseeingit.

3.Becausethereare2000juniorstudentsand1000seniorstudents,ourschoolhadbecomerathercrowded.

4.Theygotupveryearlythatdayadleftatonce,becausetheyhopedtocatchthe7:00traintoParis.

5.TheyplannedatriptoLondon,thepurposeofwhichwastogetmanynewexperiences.

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上述句子同时可以应用“1+N”定律,修改为简单句，如下：

1.Hefailedtopasstheexamination,disappointinghisparents.

2.Ithinkthisfilmispoor,despiteitslargeaudience.

3.With2000juniorstudentsand1000seniorstudents,ourschoolhadbecomerathercrowded.

4.Theygotupveryearlythatdayadleftatonce,hopingtocatchthe7:00traintoParis.

5.TheyplannedatriptoLondon,atriptogetmanynewexperiences.

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二.练习:找出并纠正下列句子中“非完整句”的错误。

1.Chinaisnolongerwhatusedtobe.

2.Althoughisnineyearsold,thislittlegirlplaysthepianoverywell.

3.Itwasapitythattherewereonly15peoplecametothepartylastnight.

4.Readingbeingaprocessofmentallyinterpretingwrittensymbols.Itinvolvesaseriesofactionthatarerelatedtoeachother.

5.Oldpeoplearefacedwithmanyproblems.Forexample,theirdependenceonfixedincomesandpoormedicalcareinnursinghomes.

6.The