2025年高考英语写作常考题型全面突破专题12 读后续写十句五定法写大纲+四步设计补全情节（解析版）.pdf

专题12读后续写十句五定法写大纲+四步设计补全情节

一、两段十句五定法的思路

Para1.Para2.

定句1:衔接提示句--心理/动作链定句6:衔接提示句--心理/动作链

句2:句7:

句3:句8：

句4:定句9:紧贴原文，交代结局

句过渡到首句句点睛

定5:P2定10:

其中第一段中的句1与句5，第二段中的句1，句4和句5共五句话基本是固定的，其他的句子安排根据具

体情况可作轻微调整。

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