高考英语复习读后续写练习：从逃避到赛场，足球场上的蜕变 .pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习从逃避到赛场，足球场上的蜕变1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文ItwasaSaturdayafternoon.IwashavinglunchwhenDadtoldmetogetready.Ibecameunhappy.Idon’tlikeSaturdays!Eventhoughit’saholidayformostchildren,itisnotformebecauseIneedtogotofootballclub.Manykidslovesports,butIamnotoneofthem.Iprefertostayathomeandread.Idon’tlikerunning,soinateamIamabadplayer.ThecoachistiredofmeandmyteammatessometimesthinkI’museless.Ihavenoideahowtoplayfootball.Usually,afterpracticemyteammateswouldaskmetostayoutofthegameandIwouldjustnod.LastThursday,thecoachtoldusthatwewouldbecompetingwithanotherteaminamonthandmanypeoplewouldcometoseethegame.Ouropponents(对手)werethewinnerlastyearandIfrozeandthoughthowawkwarditwouldbeiftheteamlostbecauseofme.4

续写原文SoIdecidedtopracticehardforthematchandIwenttopracticeeverysingleday.Afteronemonth,whenthegamedaycame,myteammateswereunwillingtotakemeintheteam,andIalsowishedtostayawayfromthegroundaswell.Buttheyhappenedtobeshortofoneplayerandhadnochoicebuttotakemeintheteam.OurteamwastheBigBlues.Therewasagreatcheeronourarrivalinthefield.Igotverynervous.Thegamestartedandwithintwominutes,Igotabluecard.BythetimeIwasallowedback,thescorewastwogoalsforeachteamandthenextgoalwoulddecidethewinningteam.5

段首句Paragraph1：Whentheballcametowardsme,Ifroze.Paragraph2：Ourteam,TheBigBlues,wonthematch!6

Part2题目分析7

续写原文分析8文章讲述了“我”不喜欢足球，周六去足球俱乐部让“我”满心不悦。在队里，因不爱跑步且不懂踢球，“我”表现糟糕，遭教练厌烦和队友嫌弃。得知将与去年冠军队比赛，“我”担心拖后腿，便每日苦练。比赛当天，球队缺人，“我”被迫上场，开场不久就吃蓝牌。回来时，比分持平，胜负在此一举。

点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9

续写思路分析Para1：Whentheballcametowardsme,Ifroze.当球朝我飞来时，我脑海中一片空白，身体仿佛被定住了一般。曾经那些在球场上的失败经历如潮水般涌上心头，让我差点放弃。然而，就在这关键时刻，我看