高考英语复习读后续写练习：小狗奥尼克斯：守护家人的水中英雄+课件.pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写语篇练习小狗奥尼克斯：守护家人的水中英雄1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文Shewastheprettiestpuppywehadeverseen,andthewholefamilyimmediatelyfellinlovewithher.WenamedherOnyxbecauseofherblack,shinyblackcoat.ShespentherfirstvacationwithuswhenshewasonlytenweeksoldandhadherfirstbathandswimintheSt.LawrenceRiver.Wehadnocluethatthisamazinglittleballoffurwouldendupbeingourhero.Asshegrewolder, Onyxbecamemoreandmoreinvolvedinourfamilyactivities.Onhotsummerdays,Onyxenjoyedfloatingontheriverwithusinherownrubbertube(橡皮圈).Amazinglystandingonthetopofthetube,shesmiledwhileshowingoffherperfectbalance.Restingherfrontlegsandpawsovertheedgeoftherubbertube,shekepthereyesshutasshefloateduntilshe’dhadenoughofthewarmsunonherblackcoat.4

续写原文Oneday,oureighteen-year-olddaughter,Margie,announcedshewasgoingtoswimacrossthebay.Nooneinthefamilywasfreetogoswimmingwithher.Theunwrittenrules,regardlessofswimmingability,wastohaveacompanioninthewaterwithyou,especiallywhenswimmingthewidthofthebay.Iwasnotagoodswimmer,soIsaidtoMargie,“TakeOnyxwithyou.”Havingheardhername,Onyxwokeupfromanapandwasreadyforaction.Margiesignedthedogtofollowher.Onyxrantothewaternexttoher.Theyenteredthefreezingrivertogetherandswamsidebysideacrossthebay.Iwatchedfromthebankastheyreachedthesandbar(沙洲)onthefarshore.Theyrestedafewminutesbeforedivingintothewaterforthereturntrip.Ifeltuneasyforsomereasonandcontinuedtowatchthepairswimsidebyside.5

段首句Paragraph1:SuddenlyIheardMargiecallingout,“Ihaveacram(痉挛)intheleg!”Paragraph2:Seeingthepairapproachingtheriverbank,Ibreathedasighofrelief.6

Part2题目分析7

续写原文分析8奥尼克斯是一只无比漂亮的小狗，它乌黑发亮的毛发惹人喜爱，全家都对它宠爱有加。它十周大时就和家人一起度过了第一个假期，还在圣劳伦斯河有了首次洗澡和游泳的经历。随着年龄增长，奥尼克斯深度融入家庭活动，炎热的夏日，它会和家人