读后续写4-人鸟情未了 课件高三下学期英语一轮复习专项.pptx

读后续写

1.Itisthesmallestbirdintheworld.2.IthasbrightcolouresandisfoundinNorth,CentralandSouthAmerica.3.Ithasalongthinbeakandpowerfulnarrowwingsthatcanmoveveryfast.4.Itcanhover(悬停)intheskylikeahelicopterandflyleftandright.5.Itistheonlybirdsthatcanflybackwards.6.ltseyesareliketwoshinyblackspots.hummingbirdGuesswhatitis

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whenandwhere/whowhatonanoldfriend’sfarm,amilkinghouseI，ahummingbird,myfriendsI________ahummingbirdwhichwaspossiblyflewintothemilkinghousethrougha_______window.Ifedhersomewateraswell.Shedin’timmediatelyflyaway,_______hoveredandlookedintomyeyes.WhenItoldittomyfriend,hepromised________thewindow.WhenIwasdeparting,thetinycreatureflewback,________intomyeyes,thenletouta__________callandwasoutofmysight.rescuedbrokenbuttofixlookingsqueakingTheme?friendshipbetweenhumansandanimalslove/careharmony:peoplecanliveinharmonywithanimalspara1:Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.para2:Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.

学生习作问题一：下面的情节好吗？为什么？1.SoIdecidedtoraiseit.Webecamebestfriends.2.Itookhertomyhomeandraiseheruntilshedied.

3.Para1:.....Ididn’tseethehummingbird.Ifellintodespaironthelastday.Myfriendshelpedmeputmybagintomycar.Suddenly,Iheardabeautifulvoice.Itwasmyfamiliarvoice.Para2:IwasIwasabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.4.Iwasabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Suddenly,IsawafamiliarhummingbirdwhichIwaitedforalongtime.Icouldhardlyconcealmyexcitement.5.Iwasabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.IcouldhardlyconcealmyexcitementafterIsawthebird.Tips1:读后续写主题必须表达真善美,情节符合常理)Tips2重点关注所给两句话。尤其写好第一段首、尾句，第二段首、尾句。情节上，前后句衔接自然，符合逻辑。

学生习作问题二：如何结尾Ibelievedthattheconnectionbetweenpeopleandbirdsneverloss(______).（黄鑫）Ieventual